Center for Academic Support

Online Consultations 

Alert: The Center and services will be unavailable Thursday, November 26th and Friday, November 27th.  Papers submitted after 1:00pm Wednesday, November 25th may not receive a response until Monday, November 30th.  

Please send your attachments as a Word document.  

If you do not get a response within the time frame posted above, please first check your clutter folder. After checking this folder and you do not have a response, please call 925-473-7591.


 What can I expect from an online consultation?

Attach your Essay as a Word Doc.

 The Center’s mission is to provide writing coaching; consultants do not proofread or edit papers. We primarily look at global issues (development, organization, logic). We will direct your attention to style and grammar problems by marking areas of concern. On longer papers, we will mark only the first two pages for style and grammar convention errors. Please limit your submission to 5 pages. If your paper is longer, please select and submit the areas that concern you the most, and if possible, include your working thesis statement.

 How will I receive feedback on my paper? 


After receiving your paper, the consultant will provide feedback to you by using the insert comment function. The consultant’s comments will appear in the margin or inserted in the body of your paper.

When your paper is returned to you, please do the following:

  • Respond to any of the consultant’s questions.
  • Revise the paper and resubmit or visit the center if you wish and due date allows.
  • Revise and turn it into your instructor.
  • Remember that the ultimate responsibility for correctness and completeness of your papers rests with you.